A violent come back

[Dune Caladona]

A fighter is seen flying around a jedi transport. The small fighter attaches itself to the hull of the transport.*

as i open the cockpit of my fighter I blast open a hole in the transport and enter.*

As I sneek around the white coridors i see a jedi coming,
his saber is drawn (he must of heard me enter)
he spots me and charges shouting*
INTRUDER! INTRUDER! over here!
with my cover blown I dicide there is one way out of this.
I grabe my whip and swing it with uncaney streangth, it hits his saber wrist and wraps around it. he strugles to pull his hand away.
to easey, you jedi are fools.
an evil grin crosses my face, I then pull the whip back and twist it around making the grip so tight it shaters his wrist, and blood drips to the ground.
his hand hangs by a string of fleash, his saber drops to the ground and he crys out in agoney and pain.
3 more jedi come and see what I have done and in rage they charge me.*

hahahha are all you jedi this nieve?

I then run at them and slide bettwen there legs and i am now behind them.
thinking fast and taking the opertonatey I swing my whip at one of the jedis neck.
In shock he drops his saber and flinches.
In that exact moment I pull him tword me and make a fist with my free hand and run it into his head with all my might, my hand shatters his skull and my hand is stuck in head.
i then pull my hand out of the jedis head and look at the other 2.

1 dowen 2 to go.

in fear one runs away, the other is frozzen in fear and dosent know what to do.

I walk up to him and but my whip back on my belt.

dont worriey the big bad whip is gone.... but i got somthing eles, and its a secret. let me wisper it to you.

as I walk up to him I put my bloodey hand on his shoulder, he shivers at the sight of me.
i then come close to his ear and pull out my blaster pistol.

you know what? I think ill let mey freind here speak on my be half.
A findish smile comes to my lips and iput the blster to his ear and cup my hand ageinst his temple, as if my blaster is to be wispering to him.

good night......

with those final words I seal his fate with an echoing blaster shot*

[Dune Caladona]

now, were is the cargo hold?
as I walk tword the cargo hold and finaley I come across a sighn that says "cargo room this way"
as I head dowen the right hall i come across a door that has the words "Cargo room" writen on it, but it is guarded by 2 republic troops, I think to my self how am I going to get past them without alearting more jedi?

finaley a soulution eanters my brain and my eyes glow sadisticley.*

I jump on one of them and quikley snap his neck, the other is so surprised he delays to sound the alarm.

heres my onley chance!

I take out my whip and swing it fast at the guards neack and it grabs him with a streangth of Unkaney nature. Useing a plan that I normaley dont use I pull him to me and bite his neck open.
(since my free hand is keeping him from wigling free)
blood pores to the floor and all over me.
I then drag both bodeys into the cargo room with me*

[Dune Caladona]

In the Cargo room I find the eggs of my eopi sea killer, (and eopi sea killers are not happey when you take there eggs!)
as I grab them and stick them in the bodies to encubate them I hear talking.

unknowen man: how did all this blood get here, I better aleart the captian.
my heart skiped a beat.

wispers: The captian?! (Gulp)
I hurrey and stick all the eggs in there and quikley open the door and drop the bodies.
unknowen man: ahhhhhhh!

I draw my whip and whip it at his neck to latch on to him, then I twist the whip, so as to tighten the grip. The mans eyes buldge and his face becomes bright red. finaley blood comes out of his eyes, ears, nose, and mouth.
ahhhh youre suffering will teach you never to rat on me!

I pull back my whip lightley and the man falls to the ground and eventualey will bleed to death.
i make my way back to the EC fighter and head tword Mykr*

[Dune Caladona]

Dunes fighter appears over the world of tatooine, a hot planet, filled with moister farmers and jaws./


-------------------------ok this thread is now on Tatooine.
as my ship flys down in the hot heat I notice the vastness of mos espa, yet it is acctuley beutifle from above, but bellow it looks like a kinerath maliks chin.
I then engage the landing gear and set the ship dowen easey and slow.
as I hop out of the cock pit i notice a crowed gathering at a gate on the far side of towen.*

[Dune Caladona]

but then I realize that what I came here for is of the upmost prioriteys.
Revenge, I hear romors that the murdeors assistant is here, and he will pay for the crimes ageinst my mother.
and he will pay with every ounce of blood the dirtey Fined has!
as I walk tword the cantina I notice I see a man who looks strangley familiar who enters the same canteina.

[Dune Caladona]

I step into the pub and look around, finaley I reconize him as the fiend who assisted in the death of my mother, in rage I walk up to him my eyes flaring with hate and Anxiatey. I then grab his shoulder and flip him around to glare into the eyes of what has drivon me insan night after night.... year after year, and then I grab him so hard he yelps in pain, I through him out the door and pluck my whip off of my belt.

You, Basterd!.....I am going to turn the dune sea red with youre inerds spread all over it!

wha- it was a fish! and it ate my boss you little runt! get the hell away from me freak!

I whip my whip at his gut, and it wraps around him tightley.

you are going to pay for my mother! in pain and blood!

I then twist the whip tighter around him and it cuts into him and the sand around him turns red*

[Dune Caladona]

you dont know why I am doing this do you?
It is becouse this is what you did to the one who raised me! and Feed me! and prtcetd me! you guted her and hung her to let the blood drip out! I saw it all....
the man screams from pain, and I rip the whip out of his gut*
orgeins drop to the hot sand*
I then wrap it around his neck and drag him across the dune sea, hours go by, and his wounds fill with sand, course and hot.... finaley I take a rope left over from a tusken raider and i hang him by his ankles on the tip of a sand crawler.
barley living the man dies in a matter of hours*
By then I am alreadey at Myrkr*