The Story I'm Making

Joseph Gray
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My past is haunting me...

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The Story I'm Making Sept 12, 2005 21:32:35 GMT

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I've decided to actually give Raider/Doom a background. I've done the introduction and the first chapter to see what people think, so feed back would be nice.
Go here to read it:
thestarwars.proboards53.com/index.cgi?board=fanfiction&action=display&thread=1126460037

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Halan Global Moderator Purple Haze A good assassin needs neither the dark or the light....he needs skill (Was Mandalore) Posts: 11,843	The Story I'm Making Sept 12, 2005 21:33:42 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Halan on Sept 12, 2005 21:33:42 GMT It touches me in ways I never thought possibly john

Joseph Gray Full Member Shadourian Apprentice My past is haunting me... Posts: 1,903	The Story I'm Making Sept 12, 2005 21:54:04 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joseph Gray on Sept 12, 2005 21:54:04 GMT Ok, that means good, I guess...
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Pele Full Member Posts: 2,136	The Story I'm Making Sept 13, 2005 23:16:07 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Pele on Sept 13, 2005 23:16:07 GMT kewl, nice job ;D

Joseph Gray Full Member Shadourian Apprentice My past is haunting me... Posts: 1,903	The Story I'm Making Sept 14, 2005 19:54:19 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joseph Gray on Sept 14, 2005 19:54:19 GMT Thanks Pele.
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Kravin O Prime Full Member Bendu Hopeful Bendu Hopeful Posts: 1,149	The Story I'm Making Sept 14, 2005 23:30:36 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kravin O Prime on Sept 14, 2005 23:30:36 GMT sevordo said: It touches me in ways I never thought possibly john Mandalore you are starting to scare me............
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ferragonda Guest	The Story I'm Making Sept 15, 2005 7:55:33 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by ferragonda on Sept 15, 2005 7:55:33 GMT No what he means is.......Mandalore have you touched that area for any reason at all yet.