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Post by Veran on Dec 6, 2005 22:16:13 GMT
Now its here the true drama begins to unfold, hope you enjoy it in all of its... Lenght  Comments anybody? I hope so anyway, I wanna know your impressions about the story of Arael, Kyra, Damien and Ranka ;D |
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Post by Kapar'in Va on Dec 6, 2005 22:24:20 GMT
very, very good so far. The fight between Ranka and Selae (sp?) was excellent. Very dark, almost gothic quality to it (I don't know if gothic is the word I am looking for, but...) and I could picture it in my head as I read it. So, well done on that. The rest of the story is very good too. You both have done a great job at giving Arael a very tragic dimension to her that makes rooting for her very easy!
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Post by Lady Zahra/Jules on Dec 6, 2005 22:29:59 GMT
Minus Shara who hates her after how she treated Paul and treated Shara herself...lol.
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Post by Veran on Dec 6, 2005 22:30:18 GMT
The story is more focused upon her side of the story so its essential for the reader to be able to recognize her Glad you liked it! ;D |
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Post by Lady Zahra/Jules on Dec 6, 2005 22:31:53 GMT
The story will shift from her very soon. Sooooo much more fighting to occur. I just hope you all can stay interested long enough to see it...hehehehe. You'll love it if you stick around for the whole thing.
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Post by Kapar'in Va on Dec 6, 2005 22:35:06 GMT
i hope so too!
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Post by The Madet Legacy on Dec 6, 2005 22:36:19 GMT
Well, honestly I love it...I just can't wait to see what you guys have planned for Bo...Or was it AJ? I can't remember who you guys wanted to use, but I'm pretty sure it's Bo...I BLAME THE SCHOOL SYSTEM FOR MY MEMORY!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Triune on Dec 6, 2005 22:38:15 GMT
I think the story is going very well so far.
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Post by Lady Zahra/Jules on Dec 6, 2005 22:38:23 GMT
pm me, Aaron and we'll get to discussing a bit  |
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Post by The Madet Legacy on Dec 6, 2005 22:43:32 GMT
I've got a bad feeling about this.....
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Post by Brandon Rhea on Dec 6, 2005 23:13:12 GMT
I WAS MENTIONED IN THIS ONE!!!!!!!!
Anywho, it was a very, VERY good chapter. Probably the best thus far, IMO. Good job.
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Post by Veran on Dec 7, 2005 0:02:51 GMT
We couldn't just forget you, could we? We looooove drama ;D |
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Post by The Prophet on Dec 7, 2005 0:04:32 GMT
where is it ranka?
i want to read it really bad lol
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Post by Veran on Dec 7, 2005 0:06:01 GMT
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Post by The Prophet on Dec 7, 2005 0:06:53 GMT
schweet
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