Post by Pele on Oct 9, 2005 1:36:46 GMT
Well I was bored a long time ago and I came up with it, yes it might have a few errors like how I was in a broken star fighter but managed to get to tatooine, and i dunno how to translate droid so i made up stuff, that'll all be fixed. And this has proof that i made it on anotehr site, but i can't give that away since i fear of getting banned.
Time Period: 27 ABY
Main Caracter: Reigo Folley:Jedi Knight, 6'2 feet tall, short spikey black hair, hazel color eyes, wears a long Jedi cloak, has 1 blue lightsaber
A long time ago, in a galaxy far,far away.....
Star Wars
It is a troublesome time for the galaxy as foreign invaders sweep across the galaxy attacking the worlds of which use to belong to Galactic Alliance. These new invaders have taken over many of the worlds in which are important to the Galactic Alliance, crippling them further.
The newly reformed Republic, now called Galactic Alliance, has found a new Supreme Chancellor in these times, and the New Republic Senate has been reestablished. But they are finding it difficult to keep up with the invaders. The Galactic Alliance has tried many times to regain itself during the war only to be shot down by the invaders quickly.
The also Newly reformed Jedi council is having its troubled times stopping these new invaders.This is again another time in which the Jedi have fought to survive throughout this horrific battle between the two.
Out in deep hyperspace one Jedi races time to the newly reformed Jedi council to tell the Council of some new information on these invaders.
Prolouge
Prologue
Out deep in the fringes of outer rim space where nothing is heard, seen, or touched, lies one An A-wing star fighter all alone in space with battle marks over it and inside lies a Jedi with no understanding of how to get home. The Jedi sat there looking around at each system seeing sparks fly out and the Jedi looked up and knew this was hopeless. He had a hyperdrive intact, but his com and his important engine had stopped, and he knew the hyperdrive wasn't fit to make it all the way back to Coruscant. The Jedi looked around hopelessly knowing he had to think fast because the information he had, had to be delivered soon. He sat back looking around at the space and then started talking into the com hoping to find it magically fixed.
"This is Fighter 1 can you hear me? Hello? Please respond I am stuck out in the Outer Rim with some main systems shut down. I need help please help."*No response*"God dam piece of crap."*He hits the com system and a few sparks fly out.*"F5-D5 can you fix anything on this ship?" The Jedi asks trying to keep his anger down
"Dwoooo eeeeeep bop."
"What you mean we are already on back up power, we had most regular power a half hour ago?"
"Beeep."
"Ok ok where is the nearest inhabited planet."
"Dooeeeeep rooop."
"Great you mean that the closest planet is Tatooine. But wait haven't they been attacked by the Yuuzhan Vong?"
"Dwoooooop beeep."
"Ohh so they haven't been, good. Set course for Tatooine then, lets see if we can get anything out of those low lives."
"Beeep Boop."
The Jedi remembered the last time he went to Tatooine and encountered some of the most stupidest people he had ever met, many of which he hoped he would never see again. He had gone there 5 years before the war had started to go see someone there. The image flashed in his mind as he remembered the moments as if it had been yesterday.
He had arrived on Tatooine and he landed there and he left to go meet his friend at the local cantina. The Jedi looked around seeing the poor souls who lived here and watched as they begged for food and credits. The Jedi felt pity on them and he continued to walk along the street, down to the cantina. While he was walking he heard someone run up and he saw a woman rush up to him, and out of nowhere she ran up to the Jedi and started hitting him. The Jedi had no clue what was going on and he pushed the woman away and watched as she fell to the ground looking back at him. The woman smiled and then she started crying, and the Jedi noticed this but didn't do anything and he just stared at the woman. The woman must have thought wrong as her face fell from sad to angry and she ran off.
The Jedi looked around as some people and aliens stared at him, which made him feel uncomfortable. He looked back at them and saw them turn there heads away and he could tell he had already left a bad impression to them so he put his hood over his head and he quickly walked away and went to the cantina. When he arrived there he saw the place was filled with manna be thugs, and mercenaries all sitting around. He did his best to avoid them and he walked into the cantina and looked around. He saw his friend in a booth in the far corner and he walked over there slowly. He went to the table and took off his hood to his friend who immediately greeted him. The two started talking about many subjects which included, credits, home, life, and other things.
As they were talking a man and a woman had approached their table. The Jedi looked at the woman and saw that it was the one who had hit him on the way here to the cantina. The Jedi knew it was trouble and he quickly stood up and saw the man start moving closer in on him. The Jedi tried grabbing his lightsaber but before he could the man had hit him and threw him out of the booth. They fought and fought until the Jedi saw the man take a wind up and try and hit him but the Jedi jumped out of the way and he ignited his lightsaber and put it to the man's neck. The man started whimpering and started asking for mercy and that he meant no harm to him, and that it was the woman's fault.
The Jedi listened to the man's tale and learned the woman had said to the man that the Jedi had hit her and taken her credits. The Jedi told the man he did not and told him about how the woman had come up to him and started hitting him and ran off. The man apologized and then he walked over to the woman and hit her a couple times. Soon the woman was apologized saying that she needed the credits and the man hit her again and then picked her up and walked off. The Jedi shook his head in displeasure and went back over to continue his talk with the man and they both laughed about what happened. The Jedi was surprised when nobody had come over to ask what happened, not even a police but he thought to himself he should,d be happy that no one came.After there talk they said their good byes and the Jedi got up and walked out of the cantina back to his ship.
When he arrived back at his ship he came back to see the person who was suppose to guard the ship was trying to break into it. The Jedi shook his head watching the stupid man trying to open it with his bare hands. The Jedi walked up and went behind him and put his mouth to the man's ear and whispered "You'll need more then that buddy!" The man jumped and looked at the Jedi and quickly ran off. The Jedi laughed and boarded his ship and flew off into space. Then the memory had blurred up and the man was back in reality.
The Jedi quickly took the memory out of his head and he started up the ship and it jumped into hyperspace and the hyper drive made a weird noise like it was going to break but it held on and made itself work all the way there. When he arrived at there coordinates the Jedi is fast asleep and is awaken by his astromech droid and he rubs his eyes and he hears his stomach growling, he had not eaten in 3 days. He looked at the status control to find the ship ready to jump out of hyperspace and he quickly woke up and got the ship ready. Soon the ship jumped out of hyperspace with a thump and it falls right over the orange planet of Tatooine.
He looks down at the planet and starts wondering if it was such a good idea. The people here on Tatooine had changed during the course of the war, many that had been thieves and thugs, were now changing into soldiers hoping they might be hero's and save the galaxy, but they knew that they had no chance. Soon he got the ship ready and when he started flying close to the planet many star fighters came up close to his and started circling him. He watched as one of them tried to contact him and an image pops up and then quickly starts getting all fuzzy and goes away. He cant find a way to talk to them but he couldn't find a way. They didn't attack him though to his surprise thinking they wouldn't take the chance and they would start shooting but they must have seen that the ship was an A-wing and was like no ship of the Yuuzan Vong. The star fighters left him and they let the Jedi go down to the planet.
He took his time going down into the atmosphere of Tatooine, and on his way he looked down to were there used to be freighters always going in and out of the planet, it was now ship less and deserted. Must have been the war he thought. When the Jedi landed he opened his hatch and got out of the A-wing and jumped out. He braced himself as he landed and soon soldiers rushed over to him and he was surrounded by soldiers with blaster rifles pointed at him. He knew that these soldiers wouldn't let him go without trying getting information off of him, thats just the way people on Tatooine were around these days. It was to tight up and worryful around here and many people were starting to worry when their planet would be attacked by these invaders. He looked around at the men seeing each one with fear in there eyes because they knew they could not last if they got attacked. They had too little of men and the enemy was to strong, all they could do was pray they were left alone
"Who are you?"The man asked "and what happened to your ship?" The tallest soldier asked him with a curios voice
"I am Reigo Folley, Jedi Knight and I have come here to get my ship repaired so I may return to the Council to give vital information on the enemy. And my ship was damaged in a battle I had recently." Reigo said staring back at the man making him take a step back and lower his rifle
"What space battle, we got no word of a space battle?" The man asked surprised
"It is nothing you need to know of, its the council's business." Reigo said sharply
"What do you mean not our business..." The man said sharply
"It is the council who sent me to get something and I was unlucky enough to have an encounter with the enemy." Reigo said annoyed
Well then mind telling me why your here?" the man said looking at him like he was suspicious
"I told you I was attacked on my way back to Coruscant and I suffered harsh casualties, as you see my ship is in horrible damage. So I was forced to land here and get repairs." Reigo said getting more annoyed
"I see. Come with me, I think the General would be intrigued to see a Jedi knight here." The man said going behind Reigo and pushing him forward
The two men walked off into the dirty, filthy roads of Tatooine. The Jedi looked around at the poor, dirty, smelly children, most of them probably still slaves working for a nearby hutt. He knew most of the hutts had died during the wars that had come in the last 30 years, but some still lived. He felt himself pitty the children and he took his gaze off of them and continued to follow the man to a big building. It looked like it must have been recently added, for it looked newer then most of the building with its clean windows, sliding door, and security. The Jedi looked up and looked at the entrance to see door had guards on each side of it. We went over to them and the man show'd them his card, probably an I.D. card by the way it was shaped and the men looked it over and nodded their heads. They gave back the card and let us pass. We walked into the building and the Jedi hoped this would be like the last time he was here.
Time Period: 27 ABY
Main Caracter: Reigo Folley:Jedi Knight, 6'2 feet tall, short spikey black hair, hazel color eyes, wears a long Jedi cloak, has 1 blue lightsaber
A long time ago, in a galaxy far,far away.....
Star Wars
It is a troublesome time for the galaxy as foreign invaders sweep across the galaxy attacking the worlds of which use to belong to Galactic Alliance. These new invaders have taken over many of the worlds in which are important to the Galactic Alliance, crippling them further.
The newly reformed Republic, now called Galactic Alliance, has found a new Supreme Chancellor in these times, and the New Republic Senate has been reestablished. But they are finding it difficult to keep up with the invaders. The Galactic Alliance has tried many times to regain itself during the war only to be shot down by the invaders quickly.
The also Newly reformed Jedi council is having its troubled times stopping these new invaders.This is again another time in which the Jedi have fought to survive throughout this horrific battle between the two.
Out in deep hyperspace one Jedi races time to the newly reformed Jedi council to tell the Council of some new information on these invaders.
Prolouge
Prologue
Out deep in the fringes of outer rim space where nothing is heard, seen, or touched, lies one An A-wing star fighter all alone in space with battle marks over it and inside lies a Jedi with no understanding of how to get home. The Jedi sat there looking around at each system seeing sparks fly out and the Jedi looked up and knew this was hopeless. He had a hyperdrive intact, but his com and his important engine had stopped, and he knew the hyperdrive wasn't fit to make it all the way back to Coruscant. The Jedi looked around hopelessly knowing he had to think fast because the information he had, had to be delivered soon. He sat back looking around at the space and then started talking into the com hoping to find it magically fixed.
"This is Fighter 1 can you hear me? Hello? Please respond I am stuck out in the Outer Rim with some main systems shut down. I need help please help."*No response*"God dam piece of crap."*He hits the com system and a few sparks fly out.*"F5-D5 can you fix anything on this ship?" The Jedi asks trying to keep his anger down
"Dwoooo eeeeeep bop."
"What you mean we are already on back up power, we had most regular power a half hour ago?"
"Beeep."
"Ok ok where is the nearest inhabited planet."
"Dooeeeeep rooop."
"Great you mean that the closest planet is Tatooine. But wait haven't they been attacked by the Yuuzhan Vong?"
"Dwoooooop beeep."
"Ohh so they haven't been, good. Set course for Tatooine then, lets see if we can get anything out of those low lives."
"Beeep Boop."
The Jedi remembered the last time he went to Tatooine and encountered some of the most stupidest people he had ever met, many of which he hoped he would never see again. He had gone there 5 years before the war had started to go see someone there. The image flashed in his mind as he remembered the moments as if it had been yesterday.
He had arrived on Tatooine and he landed there and he left to go meet his friend at the local cantina. The Jedi looked around seeing the poor souls who lived here and watched as they begged for food and credits. The Jedi felt pity on them and he continued to walk along the street, down to the cantina. While he was walking he heard someone run up and he saw a woman rush up to him, and out of nowhere she ran up to the Jedi and started hitting him. The Jedi had no clue what was going on and he pushed the woman away and watched as she fell to the ground looking back at him. The woman smiled and then she started crying, and the Jedi noticed this but didn't do anything and he just stared at the woman. The woman must have thought wrong as her face fell from sad to angry and she ran off.
The Jedi looked around as some people and aliens stared at him, which made him feel uncomfortable. He looked back at them and saw them turn there heads away and he could tell he had already left a bad impression to them so he put his hood over his head and he quickly walked away and went to the cantina. When he arrived there he saw the place was filled with manna be thugs, and mercenaries all sitting around. He did his best to avoid them and he walked into the cantina and looked around. He saw his friend in a booth in the far corner and he walked over there slowly. He went to the table and took off his hood to his friend who immediately greeted him. The two started talking about many subjects which included, credits, home, life, and other things.
As they were talking a man and a woman had approached their table. The Jedi looked at the woman and saw that it was the one who had hit him on the way here to the cantina. The Jedi knew it was trouble and he quickly stood up and saw the man start moving closer in on him. The Jedi tried grabbing his lightsaber but before he could the man had hit him and threw him out of the booth. They fought and fought until the Jedi saw the man take a wind up and try and hit him but the Jedi jumped out of the way and he ignited his lightsaber and put it to the man's neck. The man started whimpering and started asking for mercy and that he meant no harm to him, and that it was the woman's fault.
The Jedi listened to the man's tale and learned the woman had said to the man that the Jedi had hit her and taken her credits. The Jedi told the man he did not and told him about how the woman had come up to him and started hitting him and ran off. The man apologized and then he walked over to the woman and hit her a couple times. Soon the woman was apologized saying that she needed the credits and the man hit her again and then picked her up and walked off. The Jedi shook his head in displeasure and went back over to continue his talk with the man and they both laughed about what happened. The Jedi was surprised when nobody had come over to ask what happened, not even a police but he thought to himself he should,d be happy that no one came.After there talk they said their good byes and the Jedi got up and walked out of the cantina back to his ship.
When he arrived back at his ship he came back to see the person who was suppose to guard the ship was trying to break into it. The Jedi shook his head watching the stupid man trying to open it with his bare hands. The Jedi walked up and went behind him and put his mouth to the man's ear and whispered "You'll need more then that buddy!" The man jumped and looked at the Jedi and quickly ran off. The Jedi laughed and boarded his ship and flew off into space. Then the memory had blurred up and the man was back in reality.
The Jedi quickly took the memory out of his head and he started up the ship and it jumped into hyperspace and the hyper drive made a weird noise like it was going to break but it held on and made itself work all the way there. When he arrived at there coordinates the Jedi is fast asleep and is awaken by his astromech droid and he rubs his eyes and he hears his stomach growling, he had not eaten in 3 days. He looked at the status control to find the ship ready to jump out of hyperspace and he quickly woke up and got the ship ready. Soon the ship jumped out of hyperspace with a thump and it falls right over the orange planet of Tatooine.
He looks down at the planet and starts wondering if it was such a good idea. The people here on Tatooine had changed during the course of the war, many that had been thieves and thugs, were now changing into soldiers hoping they might be hero's and save the galaxy, but they knew that they had no chance. Soon he got the ship ready and when he started flying close to the planet many star fighters came up close to his and started circling him. He watched as one of them tried to contact him and an image pops up and then quickly starts getting all fuzzy and goes away. He cant find a way to talk to them but he couldn't find a way. They didn't attack him though to his surprise thinking they wouldn't take the chance and they would start shooting but they must have seen that the ship was an A-wing and was like no ship of the Yuuzan Vong. The star fighters left him and they let the Jedi go down to the planet.
He took his time going down into the atmosphere of Tatooine, and on his way he looked down to were there used to be freighters always going in and out of the planet, it was now ship less and deserted. Must have been the war he thought. When the Jedi landed he opened his hatch and got out of the A-wing and jumped out. He braced himself as he landed and soon soldiers rushed over to him and he was surrounded by soldiers with blaster rifles pointed at him. He knew that these soldiers wouldn't let him go without trying getting information off of him, thats just the way people on Tatooine were around these days. It was to tight up and worryful around here and many people were starting to worry when their planet would be attacked by these invaders. He looked around at the men seeing each one with fear in there eyes because they knew they could not last if they got attacked. They had too little of men and the enemy was to strong, all they could do was pray they were left alone
"Who are you?"The man asked "and what happened to your ship?" The tallest soldier asked him with a curios voice
"I am Reigo Folley, Jedi Knight and I have come here to get my ship repaired so I may return to the Council to give vital information on the enemy. And my ship was damaged in a battle I had recently." Reigo said staring back at the man making him take a step back and lower his rifle
"What space battle, we got no word of a space battle?" The man asked surprised
"It is nothing you need to know of, its the council's business." Reigo said sharply
"What do you mean not our business..." The man said sharply
"It is the council who sent me to get something and I was unlucky enough to have an encounter with the enemy." Reigo said annoyed
Well then mind telling me why your here?" the man said looking at him like he was suspicious
"I told you I was attacked on my way back to Coruscant and I suffered harsh casualties, as you see my ship is in horrible damage. So I was forced to land here and get repairs." Reigo said getting more annoyed
"I see. Come with me, I think the General would be intrigued to see a Jedi knight here." The man said going behind Reigo and pushing him forward
The two men walked off into the dirty, filthy roads of Tatooine. The Jedi looked around at the poor, dirty, smelly children, most of them probably still slaves working for a nearby hutt. He knew most of the hutts had died during the wars that had come in the last 30 years, but some still lived. He felt himself pitty the children and he took his gaze off of them and continued to follow the man to a big building. It looked like it must have been recently added, for it looked newer then most of the building with its clean windows, sliding door, and security. The Jedi looked up and looked at the entrance to see door had guards on each side of it. We went over to them and the man show'd them his card, probably an I.D. card by the way it was shaped and the men looked it over and nodded their heads. They gave back the card and let us pass. We walked into the building and the Jedi hoped this would be like the last time he was here.