Kakashi
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 12, 2005 8:19:44 GMT
[glow=green,2,300]Hi every one!!! Just thought you'd like to know how everything in my character's life got that way from the metal arm to my nickname the alter![/glow]By the way i'm four in this fanfic.Later on i become my age now ok? ;D [glow=red,2,300]Chapter 1:Attack of the sith.[/glow] Hey guys don't be afraid to post 1 comment per chapter.
*It was a bright day on Sky's homeplanet Tatooine.Sky was inside his homestead taking a nap. His training lightsaber that had been from his father Owen Shadowblade, a former jedi lay on his nightstand.It was his father's when he was a jedi it had His father's last name carved into it.His mother Shari was cooking dinner in the kitchen.His father was outside tending to the moisture vaporators.Suddenly a loud explosion caused sky to awake with a horrified jump.Grabbing his saber and activating it as he ran outside where his father's head lay just outside the door.It was clear that this was caused by a lightsaber for no blood had spilled. The heat generated by a lightsaber when cutting had dried up any possible blood.Fearing the worst he ran to the kitchen only to see his mother being stabbed by a sith with a blue left eye and a red right eye.
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Kakashi
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 12, 2005 9:12:55 GMT
no one's gonna comment? ok!!!
[glow=Blue,2,300]Chapter 2:The ties of family[/glow]
*Sky stood his eye's transfixed on his mother's body.The sith lord gave an evil laugh.* "So all that's left of this dump is a little runt? I'll make short work of you boy."*Sky activated his lightsaber and blocked the slash the sith lord had sent at him.The Sith lord extended his left palm and shocked sky with force lightning then pushed him into a wall and sneered.*"You're not even worth the trouble littlest of the Shadowblades.I'll let you live but remember my name! Darth Sever!!!*Darth Sever cackeled then went outside to his speeder.Remembering all his wonderful memories with his family sky body began to glow. his right arm dissenagrated and the blue aura that encircled sky let forth a blast of energy so massive that it evaporated everthing within a one-hundred mile radius destroying the sith lord who screamed in pain as his body evaporated cell by cell.When the dome of energy receded.Sky passed out his right shoulder gushing blood from a lack of an arm.Fortunatley his uncle Nathan Shadowblade had come to visit his family using a teleporter that he had developed he teleported to sky's destroyed homestead.He took sky's unconscious body with him to coruscant his home planet.
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Darth Marv
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Post by Darth Marv on Aug 12, 2005 16:17:50 GMT
i read it
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Kakashi
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 13, 2005 5:12:33 GMT
Thx chapter 3 is coming soon!!
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The Pike
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Post by The Pike on Aug 13, 2005 5:56:30 GMT
Wait...Sky is four...he has a lightsaber! I understand iit was his dad's...but......wow! he must have been trained since he was one or somethin!
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Kakashi
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 13, 2005 6:03:41 GMT
Actually most Jedi begin their training at 6 months of age Sky's father wasn't one to break tradition so after sky was six months he began his training.
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Kakashi
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 15, 2005 6:29:07 GMT
[glow=purple,2,300]Chapter 3:The arm and the tragedy [/glow]
*Sky awoke later on Coruscant.Scratching his head with his right arm he remembered he didn't have one!The arm that scratched his head was made of metal and so was the hand.In between the humongus bolt that held the arm and hand together was a crimson red gem that had an odd pattern inside it.Sky's uncle came over to him after he had noticed sky's awakening.Sky's Eyes started streaming after he remembered his family was dead.His uncle tried to comfort him.*"There There Sky it's all right."*Sky looks at him Saddened and Disgusted.* "[glow=teal,2,300]How could you say that my parent's are dead!I don't have a real arm any more and you can just say it's all right?!?[/glow]*6years went by and Sky's uncle raised him as through he were his own son.Sky comes out of his bedroom.*"[glow=teal,2,300]Uncle I've finished polishing and matenince on my arm!![/glow]*He walks into the kitchen and gives his uncle a hug."Let me see Sky."*His uncle says examining the metal arm.*"Wow you did a really good job on it!"*Suddenly republic officer's burst in to Sky's home and capture his uncle.*"[glow=Black,2,300]Nathen Shadowblade you are under arrest for the act of treason against the republic![/glow]*The officer's don't notice sky and carry his uncle away.Sky watched in horror as they took the only family he had left away.
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Post by Rayken/Hk-62 on Aug 15, 2005 6:31:35 GMT
heavy
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Kakashi
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 15, 2005 6:34:00 GMT
What can i say im good at telling stories!
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The Pike
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Post by The Pike on Sept 3, 2005 22:38:34 GMT
Except for the fact a little kid got a lightsaber.....
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