Good parts. (nar shadaa - open)

[Rayken/Hk-62]

*the smoke clears and hk-62 still stands there his paintjob is damaged but nothing seriously he touches his neck a few moments and sticks something back in. He didnt see xin anymore and headed back to the ship*

[Masuko / Luna]

*Xin sumbles into the cargo bay where Rayz and company are battling. She sees what is going on and takes her rifle and sets it to maximum power. She aims it at the front of the mob of gammorians and pulls the trigger. A great ball of blue light hurtles at them and completely disintegrates the lead gammorian. The rifle hisses and the power cartridge drops from the butt of the stock. Xin curses under her breath, drops the gun and joins Rayz behind the cargo container.*
Damn thing runs outta power just when I need it!

[Zekk Nassin]

*as she covered behiend the canisters I take off my helmet my crimson eyes look at her then I take off something on my belt it resembled a ammo cartige and handed it to her thinking that rifle could kill them quickly, In a rusty vioce i say*
" Who do we have here?"
*then I start firing over the boxes again*

[Masuko / Luna]

*Xin takes the cartridge, examines it and tosses it back to him.*
Nowhere near enough power fot that thing!
*She shouts over the blaster fire as she tosses a grenade over her shoulder.*

[Zekk Nassin]

*I reach into my belt getting the comlink and mutter some inchorent words and then around 5 secondes later 10 troopers sprint into the room guns a blazing that distraction was all i needed I jump over the boxes one fixed vibroblade slid out I then began the dance of death spinning, slicing, parring, I then felt an urdage to bring out my double bladed light saber i didn't do it. through the comlink i tell my troops to pull back they went out one had a injury*

[Rayz Manx]

Rayz muttered to Xin, "fancy seeing you here..." Rayz handed her his extra blaster. "Looks like you might need this."
Rayz couldn't care less about the remaining Gamorreans. His sole target was his ex partner, the Twilek. "Stay here. I'll be back in just a minute," he said to Xin.
Rayz proceeded to perform another of his acrobatic rolls toward the far side of the hangar, dodging blaster fire on all sides. When he finally reached cover on the opposite side of the hangar, he finally saw where his old partner was hiding. Rayz said to him, "what a coward you are to let these beasts do your dirty work for you while you sit back here and enjoy the show. Well that show is just about to come to an end..."
The Twilek looked in horror as Rayz steadily raised his blaster...

[Masuko / Luna]

*Xin twirled the blaster in her hand to test the weight and smiled. She took a look from behind the crates and saw that there were only a couple of pigs left. She shot the first one in the left eye and rolled out to shoot the second.*

[Rayz Manx]

Rayz looked the Twilek squarely in the eyes and said, "I let you live last time out of respect. But after what you've shown here, you deserve every bit of the end of this blaster."
The Twilek stammered backward slightly, and Rayz put a blaster bolt directly between his eyes. Rayz smiled slightly with satisfaction as he surveyed the scene.
Xin seemed to handle his spare blaster quite nicely. He thought to himself, "she'd better not lose that. All the modifications I've put in to that would cost an arm and a leg to replace."
The scuffle with the few remaining Gamorreans was drifting toward the exit of the hangar, and Rayz doubted he'd get a better shot at escape then he had right now. He dove for the rear entrance to his shuttle, keyed the entry code, and the doors began to open. He gave a sharp whistle in the direction of Xin and yelled, "you coming?"

[Masuko / Luna]

*Xin stood up and looked towards Rayz.*
Yeah, sure, be righ....
*There was a moment of silent realisation when Xin stopped speaking. She looked down at her chest to see a vibro blade protruding from it. She coughed and fell to her knees. Standing behind her was a droid that had just deactivated a stealth unit.*

[Rayz Manx]

The droid had obviously completed its mission, so it reactivated the stealth unit and headed out of the hangar. Rayz rushed toward Xin, grabbed her before she hit the floor, picked her up, and hurriedly carried her to his shuttle. He laid her gently upon a bench in the cargo are of his shuttle, closed the loading doors, ran toward the cockpit, and took off. Clearance to depart was quickly granted by the Nar Shadaa port authority, as he had dropped a sizable bribe to the lieutenant in charge when he first docked to avoid any awkward questions. As soon as the ship was out of orbit, he made the jump to hyperspace and set the autopilot.
Xin was lying quite still, but a very small amount of movement from breathing could still be seen... "Xin. Xin, you have to hang on for just a little bit longer. I have a friend with a medical facility on the outskirts, and I'm sure that he can fix you if you just hold on a little longer..."
In his mind though, Rayz knew that it would really be a miracle if she was able to hold on for the duration of the two hour trip. He had seen death before, and it looked very much like he'd be seeing it yet again soon...

[Masuko / Luna]

*There was no hope for Xin. The wound had run straight through her heart. She was bleeding profusely. She gasped for air and managed to utter a last few words.*
Beware of the shadow Rayz.
*She coughed heavily and closed her eyes.*
I'll remember you Rayz........
*Her chest sagged one final time. She did not breath again.*

[Rayz Manx]

Rayz gently closed her eyes with his hand and said softly, "You saved my ass twice. Not many can say that. I'm sorry I won't get the chance to repay the favor."
Rayz thought about what Xin had muttered before she died. He had heard a little about this Shadow character of which she spoke, but knew little about her background other than the darkness surrounding her. He had a few connections who could possibly give him some additional information, but he really didn't feel like talking to anyone at the moment. He returned to the cockpit of the shuttle and reset the destination coordinates for Couriscant, where he had a small apartment. He pulled out a bottle of Corinthian Whiskey from a storage cabinet in the cockpit, sat back in his chair, and took a long drink from the bottle...

[Jon Nexus/Erik Zelona]

*Jon stood on the landing pad, a little annoyed that he didn't get to fight. It had been 8 on 1, then 8 on 2, then Jon came running, and it would've been 8 on 3. But this was just a waste of his time coming to someones rescue. Jon decided he would stop coming to everyones rescue, and focus more on rescuing those people he knew. Which wasn't that many people. Dejected, Jon turned and walked away.*