Atin

[jedimaster]

name: Atin Montross
age: 20
must be of mandalorian birth: Wanted to serve the mandalorian people and Mandalore since he was very young.Since he was old enough to walk his father and brother taught him in the mandalorian ways and sent him through there own military training course which was very hard to master.Finally he joined the Mandalorian regular army and recivied some more training,he now is ready to serve the Mandalorian people.

[.:.::Bornor Re'Aden::.:.]

I guess it's okay for a starter. Maybe get back to it and add more sometime.

[Shara]

Ok... it could use some work. You're profile is essentialy your character in a nutshell. Anything and everything you want people to know about him should go into this thing. Make him real, bring him to life. His name and species really isn't enough to do that. We want to know what he looks like, were he comes from, what he's good at, what he's bad at, family, personality quirks, how he gets around, what he fights with.... the whole ball of wax. Sure, you can keep it small and simple if you really want to. But a nice profile really goes a long way with RP.