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Post by Lady Zahra/Jules on Nov 30, 2005 21:19:44 GMT
Chapter 2 is now posted for your viewing pleasure.
Chapter 3 holds lots of excitement and action. I've got to do some minor work on it and might have it up before the end of the day. If Chapter 3 doesn't snag you to the story, there's something wrong. I can assure you it's only gonna get better.
And yes, for you guys who are hating the mushiness....there is blood and pain in the next chapter...No mushiness at all. ;D
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Lu Kane
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Post by Lu Kane on Nov 30, 2005 21:25:22 GMT
*cartman voice* "Kick ASS!"
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Post by .:.::MEGA::.:. on Nov 30, 2005 21:46:07 GMT
i just seen "Its Up" and thought it meant the new site us up  |
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Post by The Madet Legacy on Nov 30, 2005 21:49:07 GMT
i just seen "Its Up" and thought it meant the new site us up Me too! WHY MUST YOU TOY WITH OUR BRAINS YOU FOUL DEMON?!!?!??!?!?!??!?! |
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Post by Arthas Vorenus on Nov 30, 2005 21:53:35 GMT
i just seen "Its Up" and thought it meant the new site us up Me too! WHY MUST YOU TOY WITH OUR BRAINS YOU FOUL DEMON?!!?!??!?!?!??!?! What he said |
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Post by Kapar'in Va on Nov 30, 2005 21:55:42 GMT
I admit, I fell for it too...but chapter 2 was very good so I will forgive you  |
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Post by Lu Kane on Nov 30, 2005 22:00:15 GMT
I admit, I fell for it too...but chapter 2 was very good so I will forgive you true dat  |
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Post by Jedi Master Kael Caivera on Nov 30, 2005 22:19:49 GMT
There ya go Kelly. Took the liberty of changing the thread name so people wouldnt get confuzzled anymore.
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Post by Veran on Nov 30, 2005 23:50:43 GMT
Such... Amazing foreshadowing and happy moment of Arael and Damien's lives ;D
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Post by Ryu Kitana/Dominic Trayce on Dec 1, 2005 0:06:51 GMT
indeed! Come one and Come all to view the greatness that is The End of Life As We Know It!
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Post by Shara on Dec 1, 2005 0:33:07 GMT
Are you and Damien writing together? The tense keeps changing.  Other than that it's very good. |
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Post by Jedi Master Arlon Kyjar on Dec 1, 2005 0:57:24 GMT
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Post by Lady Zahra/Jules on Dec 1, 2005 1:22:05 GMT
*Growls at Kit* I put the subject of the thread like that to yes, toy with your minds and get you to notice it.  Now my methods have been foiled.  As for writing together, yes we have been. I have been trying to keep the tenses the same, but it's difficult to do at other times. I haven't written in anything other than 3rd person past tense for my lab reports for years now. UGH! I'm doing my best. I'm not an English/linguistics expert. So, go easy on me...lol |
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Post by Veran on Dec 1, 2005 1:28:45 GMT
Oh lol... Hopefully I'm not killing your mind making you try to writte like me for the next chapters! I don't want you to die... Just yet |
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Post by Master Bondora on Dec 1, 2005 1:42:55 GMT
Oh lol... Hopefully I'm not killing your mind making you try to writte like me for the next chapters! I don't want you to die... Just yet write like you? Err.... |
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