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Post by Jedi Master Arlon Kyjar on Apr 10, 2005 16:46:04 GMT
I just found this on the sith site. By Sin, it is so dumb...
"There his something going on young one. A new sith his trying to rises into power...I'am affraid your trainning will be retarded... "
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Post by Veran on Apr 10, 2005 20:20:17 GMT
 I can explain- 'Retard' is the word in french for 'delayed', alot of words do look alike in french and english so he simply thought 'retarded' meant delayed lol... I made that mistake quite repetively when I had learned english for only a month 
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Joseph Gray
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My past is haunting me...
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Post by Joseph Gray on Apr 14, 2005 23:12:20 GMT
You can do a million things right, but the one thing you do wrong is what people will remember...
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Vode
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You fight well, too well. But never the less, you will fall to my blade.
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Post by Vode on Apr 19, 2005 4:37:32 GMT
Walk in the light
Walk in the dark
Feel the lightness of the sun
Feel the darkness of the heart
The sun burns the desert dry
The heart lays, quivering on the floor
Desert blooms after a steaming rain
While the ocean floor is a graveyard
The rain falls, caressing my face
And grave Stones loom like ancient demons
Face the fears which stalk your shattered soul
Know that demons walk in the guise of man
Pieces of your shattered life glint like glass
A crippled man walks with the weight of the world
A glass like glint from a young lover's eye
As the world revolves relentlessly.
 EDIT= Me, 1998.
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Vode
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Post by Vode on Apr 19, 2005 5:07:14 GMT
(this one I made, in a rare experiance. Yes I felt love... But dont think I am going soft!)
A soft voice in the twilight offering assurance
I am wrapped in the arms of the night
a mental caress providing sanctuary
I am kissed by the darkness
a haven from the casual cruelty of strangers
I am loved by the shade
serenity sought in the quiet sounds of sleeping
I am held in midnight's glance
a whispered word strokes the body's desires
I am touched by moonbeams
I long to mend your shattered soul
Like the sediment built over the millennium, so is your
heart,
each layer has its own story, its own pain.
I crave to capture your elusive love
Like a child in the night,
too brave to call out, too afraid to sleep.
I dance in the light of your passion
Like the soft summer rain eroding the stone,
a caress can calm the wild from a caged creature's eyes.
I will take the chance
believing ice ages end and hearts can heal.
- me, 2001
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Vode
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Post by Vode on Apr 19, 2005 5:40:16 GMT
I have one more poem to share with you all, here it is. this one I made just for no reason, I just had somthing on my mind, it was made this year./
Sing like the harp of an angel
Move within me like a summer's gale
warm, harsh and wild.
Call to me like the heat of blood
Circle like a jackal waiting
for the last shuddering breath.
Inspire me to dance on shards of glass
Love me like a slave loves its master
but hate me the same way.
Are as predictable as a rabid fox
Steal my breath with your crooked grin
and return it to me with a stolen kiss.
Wrap about me like a python
Beckon me like a dog
and dismiss me just as quickly.
Are summer's child
Fleeting as a first kiss
on a virgin's lips.
Search the world seeking the one
But can only watch as a crow marches
like a soldier over your grave.
Feel the rasp of rope on wrists
Stare in morbid fascination as I slip
from your life as your pants hit the floor.
- me, 2005
(EDIT: Fixed spelling)
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Vode
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Post by Vode on Apr 19, 2005 5:54:13 GMT
Any one else like poetrey?...... or am I just a freak now ......... |
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Post by Anya Reyes on Apr 20, 2005 2:55:54 GMT
wow, those are really good Fang! And yeah, I wrote some poems before too... but I think yours are way better, lol
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Vode
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Post by Vode on Apr 20, 2005 3:04:42 GMT
heh, I do it on my free time.... But thease are my best I have so far, yesterday I made one. I could post it..... I probaley will, but first ill let some other people have a shot at it. |
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Post by Anya Reyes on Apr 20, 2005 3:08:36 GMT
lol... same here. I usually do it whenever I'm extremely bored. I wrote two recently, I might post them...
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Post by Ryu Kitana/Dominic Trayce on Apr 20, 2005 3:11:35 GMT
ive tryed to make some but i just cant find the words.
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Vode
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Post by Vode on Apr 20, 2005 3:20:05 GMT
Electric glances filled with soulful significance
Rough, worker's hands, a touch filled with palatable passion
The kiss of flickering headlights illuminate a lover's embrace
Cool air against flesh; skin branded by the night
Each moment a memory; known yesterday, today and tomorrow; timeless
Desire denied by a powerful pride
Evening's encounter sealed with the click of the door.
- me, 2005
(it isnt my best, but it is my latest)
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Post by Syryy on Apr 20, 2005 3:24:56 GMT
It takes only a candle to create light in the darkest of nights, but even in the brightest day there will always be shadows... however slight.
-Me, just a few days ago, in the OLC.
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Post by Ryu Kitana/Dominic Trayce on Apr 20, 2005 3:25:34 GMT
How can you come up with stuff like that
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Post by Syryy on Apr 20, 2005 3:27:46 GMT
I'm not good at poetry, so don't expect anything more... I'm more of the "prosey" type.
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